Make It To Go - quick, short, and to the point. i like it! this is the kind of stuff that gets a message across, without being too preachy.

P.S. would you look at ome of my stories, too? thanks.

Live Forever, or Die Trying!

More Canadian writers make me smile.

interesting - I couldn't follow the names, but very poetic and a lot of good in it.

(btw, the best alternative might be 'debutants' for teenagers)

Very well written, has ALOT of feeling, like a real person, with anger and deep emotions. Well... that's all I have to say if I was just some critic, but if I was still me I would probably say: DAMN! That's GOOD!

Kinda confoozing but I liked it. Better then my story lol.

Kaori: Mwa hahaha, its me Yuki! I'm a member now! *sang in the toon of im a big kid now*
Yumi: Isn't that something to be proud of?
Kaori: XD Booya!!
Yumi: *sigh* I guess it is.
Kaori: Like I said before, depression. Good, but depression. *points to a random story* Not depressing, *points to Maeko's story* Depressing. *continues to do this*
Yumi: *sigh* Yo Maeko, Kaori's story is called Wolves of the Red Moon. Just thought you outta know. See ya.
Kaori: De-*falling over*

Yuki: Yo, Maeko-sama. Nice fic..*sniff* ITS DEPPRESSING!! *ahem* But not as deppressing as that Samurai X cd...Anyhoo-
Yumi: Yes, please review.
Yuki: Is that really what the reviewy thingymajiggy is for? Hmm never thought of that..*thinks*..Oh well..Is there anyway you can update? It takes you so long to update on fanfiction.net! Update pwz! XD

I like this story. I like it because it's special in it's own way. And I love the narration.