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Snow and Spindrift 2007-03-04 . chapter 1
a clever "deuce" is but my guess...
these woven clues will force
a path of intelligent regress
to find this riddle's source.

nice job... i liked how it was kind of a process. i tend to get lost with riddles and have to end up taking them apart to find an answer ;)
amnesiac-vampire 2006-12-14 . chapter 4
lol i actually know this one!! it's the monkey right? wells i thought it flowed quiet well, i mean not as good as the others but still good.
amnesiac-vampire 2006-12-14 . chapter 1
...i don't know T_T i believe i got the first paragraph right though you lost me with the second and third and sorta the fourth >< oh wells maybe it'll come to me later. kewl riddle!
Cloud Burst 2004-09-26 . chapter 5
mercury =)
SleepDontWeep 2004-09-01 . chapter 1
i have no idea wot u r talking about but its gona leaved me puzzled all day... doy.
love ya lots!
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godawful teen-angst poetry 2004-05-09 . chapter 5
ok.
mer, that's easy. At first I thought the beginning of the colors was red, but that didn't work. So you must be talking about letters...
mer t u r day
...
unless beginning of colors isn't the t from the, but the c from colors, in which case it's mer c u r day. Oh. Mercury. Duh. Element, thermometers, that roman transcription of a greek god...was his greek counterpart hermes? I can never keep equivalents straight, oh well. aha. I got one! go me.
~lyv
obsidian katana 2004-05-07 . chapter 5
ooh i love riddles, and this one is awesome. great diction and imagery, and i know it! yay. mercury, right? great job. do write more of these. keep up the awesome work!
CoolBeans18s 2004-05-06 . chapter 5
Ooh! A riddle!
~2 hours later~
Ah! Its so beautiful, and so.. unattainable! *hangs head in shame* I can't do riddles - but its a wonderful, wonderful poem! I'm sure people a lot smarter than I am will be getting it soon, and then I can... steal their answers! And invent a time machine! and go back in time! and say that I knew what it was first! And then the world _will be_ MINE! MWHAHA-
everyone: O.o Its just a riddle, Beans.
Erm, oh, yeah... >.< Wonderful poem! Very good and creative riddle! Its brilliant!
~ CoolBeans18s ^_^
simpleplan13 2004-05-05 . chapter 5
lol.. i can never get these! mercury? thats a gues tho.. lol what is it?
Electra Fairford 2004-03-12 . chapter 1
"deuce"
Deuces! heh gotta say I didn't like it much...there's only one word for a card with two spots, so anyone who knows that can get it without all the tricky, illogical letterplay. The best riddles are four lines, unless they're double riddles or better - or they can be longer if it's nought but letterplay, with some crazy puns. The poem ought also to make sense, to be valid as an artistic work, instead of just a game.
Also, I'm pretty sure "dueling" didn't come into vogue until the Renaissance, and I know the word association is with the Renaissance and later. Duel-worthy differences tended to be settled by trials-by-combat, by small wars or by competition at the jousts, I suppose.
The "dragon's sale" clue is tacky. "slips on" should be instead of "slips upon"; it's amazing how often "upon" is misused.
What's the quote about "a critic is one who knows the way but can't drive the car?" I ought not to criticize, since I'm sure I couldn't do so well. Please don't consider this a flame, it's not meant as such, just as honest as I can be.
Morncreek 2004-02-06 . chapter 4
MONKEY! Did I guess it? DidIdidIdidIdidI?? Well? Do I get bananas?
Morncreek: Hey, you! That's my keyboard!
Go away!
Morncreek: *holding banana* Here, monito
Children of the Root 2004-01-29 . chapter 4
I like this riddle! I finally figured one out. ;)
Its very good, mime!
godawful teen-angst poetry 2004-01-23 . chapter 4
Haha I know what this is, they announced it yesterday...but maybe I shouldn't say it...as I apparently gave it away before...but its a creature creationists deny is related to us. Well you know what I mean.
This isn't so much a riddle as a clever poem, but I still like it. Good job again
~lyv
Deadwind 2004-01-22 . chapter 4
Aw man, mime, I need to work on my math...I was like "tues-knob", "tueskey" and...I'll just stop right there...
But good job! It's awesome!
Keep it 100 2004-01-22 . chapter 4
Nice work. I think I got the answer, but I'm not sure. Only time will tell.
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