Very good. I really enjoyed this. There were several twists to the story. That's always fun and entertaining. I liked the story better in the beginning though, before John arrives at the warehouse. I loved how you described everything so vividly and in such a negative and atrocious way. That was really cool. Toward the end there became less thought and detail, which is what originally made the story what it was. I still liked it though. It's very good. There's a lot of truth to this too, although some people with veils before their eyes might not think so. They don't see the world for how it truly is, nor do they see people for how they truly are. I noticed a few spelling errors here and there, but nothing major. The dialogue is excellent in this. A lot of writers struggle with that I believe. You certainly don't. You don't seem to struggle with anything though. You're a very good writer.

I think you're right, women can be the most vindictive. Nice description, really convayes the feeling of filth and disgust. Quite creepy to read.

Wow, I loved it. Very full of loathing. I myself despise the human race, so this was a bit of a reflection on how I feel.

Very good.