 Kiobi Nitaya 2006-05-11 . chapter 1like it or not, this is the best thing you've ever written in my opinion. It snagged my attention and demanded to be read...
Am I the only one on fictionpress anymore? If you even read this, you'll be glad (or won't care) that I'm getting rid of stuff and trashing "In Cognito." If I just don't redo it. But, you know... Good this time...
Anyways, later! |
 Syluna 2004-11-05 . chapter 1 Why didn't you go on and make this into a free form poem? Positively lovely, dear. It seems similar to "I just make them up, see!" by Isaac Asimov. |
 persephone's sketchbook. 2004-07-28 . chapter 1I like it. A story of questions. Cool and very imaginative. |
 Tachyon 2004-06-30 . chapter 1I'm just going through some of your other stories . . .
Very nice: 4 paragraphs without a single period! An entire story of questions . . . hmm . . . |
 mages-shade 2004-01-17 . chapter 1I liked it for the most part, the flow of questions was good, but I'm sure you could think of more. XD
I especially like the thought of when the girl is old another little girl sits at her computer asking the same questions.
Review tag *you're it* |
 Emerald Raven Mist 2004-01-17 . chapter 1I like your use of metaphors. I think you culd expand it a bit though. |
 Sycho Skitz 2003-12-14 . chapter 1Very creative!
What a lovely question to ponder...don't think about it too much or you'll give your brain knots...^_^
-Skitz |
 Acwaball 2003-11-07 . chapter 1 Hey! I really like this little thing! It's really createive! |
 Dragon! 2003-09-04 . chapter 1 WHY ISNT IT LONGER?! |
 Sivart 2003-08-08 . chapter 1this was excellent. A very good question. Thanks for revewing my new chapter and letting me know you liked it. I was questioning whether or not to use it because it didnt seem useful but now I realize it helps the story flow along and great little idea "Where Do Books Come From"
Sivart |
 LaughingAstarael 2003-07-29 . chapter 1Wow. That's... wow. Wonderfully beautiful. Wonderful.
~~Mera |