Writing the way you feel at that moment is the best way, in my opinion, because the perfect words flow onto the paper (or computer screen, if that is the way you write). Then the emotion is clear and powerful.

My favorite part of the poem is the last stanza; if words are powerful then I think I just got knocked over the head with an ACME(tm) mallet! ~_^ Sayonara.

As always, beautifully written! You are SO TALENTED! That first stanza really grabbed me! Keep it up!