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| xLecta 2003-08-22 ch 1,  | abuseThe beginning is all sad and makes you remember times when you felt like this and then the ending gives you hope and makes you feel better about it all. I liked how you put it "someone manages to reach me" and "my heart melts into raindrops" really reflects the topic of the poem. |
| Morncreek 2003-08-09 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful poem. I identify with it well because of certain recurring events in my life. This will be the last poem of yours that I review tonight, but don't worry - I'll come back and R&R the rest! |