Very well written. Underlying themes speak very clearly to me.

I like it! I look forward to reading the story based on it! ^.^

Sounds alot like your story The Warrior. I liked this poem just as much. It is really dark and somewhat mysetrious. makes you want to find out more about this girl.

IT's hard to believe that people like the one you describe were just innocent children once. This was an outstanding poem.