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| You know who, and if yah do... 2004-04-18 ch 4, anon. | abuseit is really good, i love the Yaoiness! heheheheheh cant wait till time to read the next one :-) lallalalal *mutters something about joe* |
| You know who 2004-04-18 ch 2, anon. | abuselalalalala I like it heheheh |
| You know who 2004-04-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou right one damn good preview lol |
| Rinna 2004-02-12 ch 6,  | abuseI just had to review this chapter... it's beautiful! I love the way it's written, and it's just very sweet! Although I am a yaoi fangirl, at heart I'm just a hopeless romantic. *sighs* Seriously, I loved this chapter. I love the whole story, but this chapter, to me, is the best. |
| Lessien Telperin 2003-08-30 ch 8, | abuseI absolutely LOVE the whole 6 rulers thing and they're jobs n' all...THATS SO COOL! but you can't end it...you just CAN'T! But i kno how it feels to have a life outside of ficpress so I wont pester you ;) |
| Morncreek 2003-08-28 ch 8, | abuseVery kawaii ending! Though, exactly what did Sapphire do to Ryken? It all went so fast... A way to tell a story is good is when it ends you have a sorrowful feeling because it is ending. I definitely feel that. Great job with the story! |
| Zooming 2003-08-25 ch 8, | abuseI greatly enjoyed your story! *mocks Ryken* That's what you get, loser! Ahem, sorry about that. Anyways, I like the ending! I like the whole story! OOh I noticed your many reviews! Popular, aren't we? lol. See, your story really IS good! I'm happy for Sapphire. She was finally able to succeed. It must have been painful reliving their deaths every time. *sighs* Anyways, I think you should make a sequal!! I highly encourage you too! If you do email me and tell me, okay? |
| Lessien Telperin 2003-08-23 ch 6, | abuseYEAHaha!! I love mushy scenes...hehe...okay, don't mind me! |
| Lessien Telperin 2003-08-23 ch 5, | abuseI keep sending reviews but I can't help it! The plot is so exciting :D *giggles incessantly* |
| Lessien Telperin 2003-08-23 ch 4, | abuseIT WASN'T BAD AT ALL! very good ^-^ |
| Lessien Telperin 2003-08-23 ch 3, | abuseHAHAHAHA! heehee...heh-heh...I figured they were gay. I absolutely adore Jade and can't wait to meet Diamond! *We do meet him..rite?* |
| Lessien Telperin 2003-08-23 ch 2, | abusesaddness, memory, persverance...and so much more to add to your creative concoction! (don't know how to spell that..hehe) I ENVY YOU! It's so god...*beams happily* |
| xLecta 2003-08-22 ch 8, | abuseno! ITS OVER?!?!? Write more! Oh my god it was so GOOD! What a wonderful ending, i loved your story so much. Words can not describe how much of a good writer you are! The sequal idea sounds really awesome and i think you should write one. I cant bare to let go of your characters. i hope to see them in another story. Keep on writing ~Innocent Nightmare |
| xLecta 2003-08-22 ch 7, | abusethis one was an awesome chapter to. GEEZ YOUR SO GOOD! Man im jelous now! Keep up the good work, its so awesome. one of the best storys ive read! ~innocent nightmare |
| xLecta 2003-08-22 ch 6, | abuseAW Emerald is so sweet! That was one of the best chapters. Your such a good writer. Have you tried to get published? I know you could, your so talented and i love your stories. i can not wait to read more. keep writing im dying here! |