This story was very different from what I usually read. But I liked it. So much in fact that I am going to add this to my favorites.

Keep on writing!!

Hm... it was alright. Something to read when you're bored with nothing (Okay, you've got homework to do but you don't wanna do it, tcha) to do, and it's amusing.

That's it really.

That was really, really good. Especially the moral at the end. *laughs*

Nice little story. I've always liked the english accent, and enjoyed reading stories about an englishman or woman for that matter.

Very good job! Loved this story!

You know, I have a terrible confession to make. If you could remember...maybe not...I once put you in my favorite Authors...but I thought you stopped writing coz it's been so long since I've seen any of your works so I decided to clear you out of the list...and now I see what I horrible mistake that was.
I sincerely beg for your forgiveness of my transgression. I promise I'll put you in my fave authors & stories in my other pen name, Wicked Saint Seductress.
You have some talent in you. I love this story. It has everything in it...Sugar, spice & everything nice!
Very, very original. I love how unique this is. I've never read anything like this before in romance fictions. This is truly outstanding.
I've been making a draft of a story too, with an English guy as one of my leading protagonist...but it seems I'd have to change. ^_^
This is short. I love that fact too. I'm not that much fond of getting my feast of reading the story be cut off! I'm quite an impatient reader that's why. But anyway, what's a voracious reader to do but to continue.
Ah, this is really great> I cant seem to get enough of basking it's brilliant workings...but of course, I'd have to stop typing sometime...not right now though...I still want to say more.
Oh I also noticed the surnames Upton & Sinclair. Heh, kind of reminds me of that guy who wrote a book about, if my memory serves me right, meat factories and the nasty goings-on in them during the roaring 20s. I know his name was Upton Sinclair.
Anyway. don't stop sharing your works with us here in FP. Their really good...I know. I know. I sure write a long review. It's part of my reputation. I'm the reader who loves writing long reviews. And I do, most of the time at least.
Really outstanding writing piece!
The most notorious stalker in FP,
The most perverted untouched virgin,
-Wicked Tongue

wow. i think its romantic a bit, interesting, and most of all funny. orignial n not so obvious as other stories i have read. wow again. and it was great reading ur story.

wow. thats was such an amazing story. you are an AMAZING author. i never read long stories, but i started yours and got hooked. i'm looking forward to reading more of your stories and/or books? anyways, just wanted to say keep up[ the AMAZING work.

o! i liked it! superb work!!very creative!

Oh my God that was so cute. I loved it! The ending was really satisfying.

This is really good. I like your writing style, it's very distinctive.

this story is realli good, but it's ashame because this story deserves more than 8 reviews...
keep writin dude, u got some talent =P

Wow, your're a excellent author. I loved the story. Really creative. Keep up the great work.

I loved it, very orignal

wow that's an amazing story! Good job!