aww how cute

aw so sweet I feel as if my heart's melting. Nice story-line, love that 'lust--demon, love--human' idea, which makes sense for me. I usually prefer stories in chapters, but this works for me. God/Dog is...cute. I know this sounds weird, but still =P(A god demanding for a belly rup?) You must be a Phantom fan--Erik and Christine, Michael Crawford.

Cute. Really cute.

this story was brilliant, I luved it!

aw...that was just so SWEET. i mean, to be frank, there's still quite a bit of work to be done on the details and all, but i'm not complaining cos i understand that this is a one-shot kind of thing. it's strange isn't it, that the characters happen to be named erik and christine. if you love the phantom of the opera as much as i do, you'll know why i was doubly touched by your story. in phantom of the opera, it was so sad that erik and christine never got together, even though he loved her so much that he was willing to let her go away with raoul. so yeah...great job done and i hope you'll continue to write more =)

That was great! Completely unique and very interesting. I loved the plot and charachters,it was truly a wonderful story. Keep writing!

That is so sweet. *tears* such a good story.

So touching - - it made me cry. Awesome job on it, i loved the plot, and how she finally sells her soul thingy.
Great Job!!
Sammi**

First, I would like to congratulate you on a lovely little story!
Second, I would say that this story could be enhanced by adding more descriptions, and by writing through rather than thru.

Wow! This is really, really good. Could you create a follow-up chapter, because I really enjoyed this story.

Once again...that was a great story...God dammit...I'm Jealous...
:-P I';ve read two of your stories so far, and they are great and creative. Good Job. ;)

Brilliant story. I absolutely loved it.

That was a GREAT story. Inventive, convincing, honest... I absolutely love it. The only thing I could complain about is the lack of detail... It could really be enhanced with a few extra words here and there to add flavour. Also, the use of "thru" instead of "through" kinda bothers me. It doesn't really change the effect of the story, but it would just seem a lot more formal and complete if you went back and changed it. And it would be easier to read if it was separated into chapters. Other than that... amazing. Great work.

Oh dear heavens above! That was wonderful! So very very good! More like a Rocky Road ice cream, and I'm telling you that you're the very first author I've given such a compliment to.
You're one of Fictionpress's brilliant authors. ^_^

My goodness - that was one of the best stories I have ever read. A very original plot-outline, and I just LOVE the way your characters weren't the normal 'perfect' models, yet their flaws is what made them irresistable. I didn't stop reading it until the very end, making the reader not want it to end all the same. Lovely, Charming story-Keep on writing!