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| Banana Chopsticks 2005-07-24 ch 1,  | abuseaw i really liked this! the ending was so adorable. i thought it was great how you managed to develop the characters so well over only a short span of time. or, i guess it would be, a short span of text :) |
| stargate-geek 2004-06-11 ch 1, | abuseWow! This story is incredible. You did a great job with caracter development, I loved Hellcat, she was SO cool! |
| OldJoe 2004-04-25 ch 1, | abuseI really like this! I would love to see it continued, with more detail on the crime world. It reminds me of the crow, which is a good thing. |
| moonjump05 2004-02-22 ch 1, | abuseThis story has so much potential! You should really expand it into a full-length work. I enjoyed it, good job! |
| Guys who brought you Triden... 2003-07-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is AWESOME! I am in complete awe here. This should be made into some long running comic series, a few books, a tv show AND SEVERAL feature films! This can't be the end. You can't make us fall in love with characters like this then leave it after one little bit. I need more! Laters, Stoo. |