aw i really liked this! the ending was so adorable. i thought it was great how you managed to develop the characters so well over only a short span of time. or, i guess it would be, a short span of text :)

Wow! This story is incredible. You did a great job with caracter development, I loved Hellcat, she was SO cool!

I really like this! I would love to see it continued, with more detail on the crime world. It reminds me of the crow, which is a good thing.

This story has so much potential! You should really expand it into a full-length work. I enjoyed it, good job!

This is AWESOME! I am in complete awe here. This should be made into some long running comic series, a few books, a tv show AND SEVERAL feature films! This can't be the end. You can't make us fall in love with characters like this then leave it after one little bit. I need more! Laters, Stoo.