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| Written Riot 2005-03-24 ch 1,  | abuseI've got myself a little rating system going on here: * = decent/fair** = average* = Very good* = Excellent This story, although quite lengthy, provided a real sense of the future (much like i, Robot). The characters were undeniably human and the world in which they lived was all too real. Louise did seem to fly off the handle at those enhanced women (especially with pushing them into the tub) but other than that it was as though reading a film script. * |