What a cool story!

I love this story. I just was smiling at the end. It was great, wonderful, I can't describe it well enough.

This story is very original i love it. hope to read more of it. I've written a story do u mind if u review? i'm kinda new to this.

That was great! And so much fun! Good work. I loved the ending.

I loved every word of it! Amazing and flawless. Wow! That was so good. I love the aspect of the character actually being real and not just some model. Kudos to you! Awesome story!