this is a really good story...but really long, it took me a while to read it all, but still... a really good story!

You know, I wasn't getting into this at first, but I was wondering about the fat woman. Now I'm glad I kept reading, this is pretty darn interesting and I've enjoyed reading this.

it's somewhere near chinatown, not somewhere need chinatown.

I like this story. A lot like Vegas and this is so cool!

Very interesting story, although in some parts it was a bit hard to believe. Original and it definately kept the reader entertained. keep on writing

Someone has a problem with my main female character being fat. Well, deal with it! I'm fat and it's about time someone showed that fat women can kick butt too! Grow up.