I thought that it had an okay start, but it was a little lame when you BLEEPED out the cuss words, cmon, be a little authentic?

Interesting concept. Good job, and keep it up.

Whoa...this was a little weird but still all the same cool. Liked how the main character wasn't all strong and powerful, total new twist on things. Definitely liked the twist at the end with her great grandfather being the evil dude. Keep writing!!

This is a very good story! I really enjoyed it. It kept me on the edge of my seat. Great job! I'd like to read more of your works.
~Lisa~

Well, that was interesting. Thorne was imprisoned in his own mind? Es-Caddy blending into one person? That should sound a lot wierder to me than it does. Have you ever read enything by Kay Hooper? E-mail me and satisfy my curiosity, please. (melokia2007@wmconnect.com)
I like your story, especially the concept of the eyes changing. And Caddy got to escape her twisted body. (I love that name. Most people seem to want to pronounce it like Katie, though. It's not that hard to pronounce!)
Great. It seems like everything passes a little quick, though, and nothing is really explained for people that aren't familiar with the theories of psychic ability.

this sounds like a good story i think the writing is really great

OMG how come no1's reviewed this? that was amazing!!
I have no criticisms (i dont think i spelt that right), it doesnt need any. Take it to a publishers, and i'm serious for once.
Brilliant!!
:-D