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| Firespirit44 2006-04-28 ch 1, | abuseVery creative. ^^ Berserk at times, but overall very good. Thumbs up. |
| black leather 2004-11-23 ch 1, | abuse:)That was a great story. Loved it very much. |
| joker8baller 2004-03-24 ch 1, | abuseYou have a great story line and plot, really like it, can't wait for the next update. Now review mine http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1535824 |
| Invader Zin 2003-09-07 ch 1, | abusei like your story, it's pretty cool^^ |