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| Sector 2006-06-16 ch 1,   | That was really an amazing story. |
| Dan Malone 2005-07-15 ch 1, | It was good, if I wasn't in a rush to finish up some paperwork, i definately would have finished it. Even though I'm not into religion, the summary and the title caught my attention, real great. Check out my story 'The End of Our World' |
| lioness2004 2005-05-08 ch 1, | This is really well done. It puts a spin on something that people don't really take a second glance at. If you keep writing I'll keep reading. |
| midnight assasin 2005-03-11 ch 1, | great story please check out my story shadows of fear |
| Shuyan 2005-03-10 ch 1, | great story, i love it! You could obviously tell that you worked very ** this and guess what...The stories great! Please continue! If you have a chance can you check out my story Shade of darkness:The battle |
| Justin 2005-02-20 ch 1, | This is a really good story! I think it would be a could super-hero story. like the punisher? |
| Glenak 2004-11-01 ch 1, | ...and thou shall not use the name of God in vain... Do you know what you're playing at? |
| Virawiel 2004-10-28 ch 1, | Very good. I like the whole renegade priest thing. Nice idea. |
| spearsister 2004-02-03 ch 1, | That was really really well written. I love that you went reletivly serious instead of super hero cliche. I look forward to more of the story oh and i love the whole "Vigilante Commando Priest" thing it's great. |
| Saena 2004-02-01 ch 1, | Hm. This is a good, well-written story with an excellent premise. I enjoyed it. Keep writing! |