That was really an amazing story.

It was good, if I wasn't in a rush to finish up some paperwork, i definately would have finished it.

Even though I'm not into religion, the summary and the title caught my attention, real great.

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This is really well done. It puts a spin on something that people don't really take a second glance at. If you keep writing I'll keep reading.

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great story, i love it! You could obviously tell that you worked very ** this and guess what...The stories great! Please continue! If you have a chance can you check out my story Shade of darkness:The battle

This is a really good story! I think it would be a could super-hero story. like the punisher?

...and thou shall not use the name of God in vain... Do you know what you're playing at?

Very good. I like the whole renegade priest thing. Nice idea.

That was really really well written. I love that you went reletivly serious instead of super hero cliche. I look forward to more of the story oh and i love the whole "Vigilante Commando Priest" thing it's great.

Hm. This is a good, well-written story with an excellent premise. I enjoyed it. Keep writing!