Very cool. Very realistic too. Keep up the good work! This story is like magic!

this is quite good, the character is kind of like the "unexpected hero". it was a little confusing around the middle, but very good.

I love the fact that Zenith is fat. You make your characters very real, which is excellent.

I love superheroes who are realistic - I tried to make the characters in my story like real people, and hopefully I've done okay *gulp*

But anyway, yes. Excellent. Bravo.

Wow! I really loved it. It was very well written and very captivating

I like this story very much. I hope to see more stories like this. If you keep writing I'll keep reading.

wow, your ability in putting things across is truely amazing! just watch that text language 'Putting you thru all sorts of tests... ' does not get into your masterpiece ^_^

I love it!I love how you showed that these were real people and not perfect gods.

That is absoloutely amazing, really good, and a good ending..It's extremely rare when the hero dies, it's a really nice touch. Yeah, I really like your writing style too, and I like the fact Martha isn't a stupis skinny all athletic perfect life person, it puts reality into the story...really good, words can't describe it.

this was a really good story. Kind of sad, but it was great. the stories in fictionpress are a lot better and better quality then those on fanfiction.

I like how you make the character so unique. She is trouble, fat, and bisexual which is rare in stories (usually gay or straight). I also like how you work the old-style super hero concept into the story in a new kind of way. The term "super hero" didn't even occur to me for awhile. However, I think you should have described the situation the character is in a bit more.

My favorite thing? She was bisexual. Makes me feel a hell of a lot better since I am, too. xD But honestly, this story is great. I love how the character was flawed.
I also love the length, too. It's mysterious. I'm going to have to scope out your profile!