 Abominationz 2006-04-20 . chapter 1Very cool. Very realistic too. Keep up the good work! This story is like magic! |
 Ixchella Samara 2006-03-05 . chapter 1this is quite good, the character is kind of like the "unexpected hero". it was a little confusing around the middle, but very good. |
 Anya Tempest 2005-11-21 . chapter 1I love the fact that Zenith is fat. You make your characters very real, which is excellent.
I love superheroes who are realistic - I tried to make the characters in my story like real people, and hopefully I've done okay *gulp*
But anyway, yes. Excellent. Bravo. |
 Ky-Ky Apocalypse 2005-11-13 . chapter 1Wow! I really loved it. It was very well written and very captivating |
 lioness2004 2005-08-13 . chapter 1I like this story very much. I hope to see more stories like this. If you keep writing I'll keep reading. |
 luxian 2005-08-08 . chapter 1wow, your ability in putting things across is truely amazing! just watch that text language 'Putting you thru all sorts of tests... ' does not get into your masterpiece ^_^ |
 Mr.M7 2005-05-20 . chapter 1I love it!I love how you showed that these were real people and not perfect gods. |
 Novthoniel 2005-04-19 . chapter 1That is absoloutely amazing, really good, and a good ending..It's extremely rare when the hero dies, it's a really nice touch. Yeah, I really like your writing style too, and I like the fact Martha isn't a stupis skinny all athletic perfect life person, it puts reality into the story...really good, words can't describe it. |
 Takara Taji 2004-12-28 . chapter 1this was a really good story. Kind of sad, but it was great. the stories in fictionpress are a lot better and better quality then those on fanfiction. |
 De2nis 2004-05-23 . chapter 1I like how you make the character so unique. She is trouble, fat, and bisexual which is rare in stories (usually gay or straight). I also like how you work the old-style super hero concept into the story in a new kind of way. The term "super hero" didn't even occur to me for awhile. However, I think you should have described the situation the character is in a bit more. |
 Beached Stars 2003-12-04 . chapter 1My favorite thing? She was bisexual. Makes me feel a hell of a lot better since I am, too. xD But honestly, this story is great. I love how the character was flawed.
I also love the length, too. It's mysterious. I'm going to have to scope out your profile! |