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| Abominationz 2006-04-20 ch 1,  | abuseVery cool. Very realistic too. Keep up the good work! This story is like magic! |
| Ixchella Samara 2006-03-05 ch 1, | abusethis is quite good, the character is kind of like the "unexpected hero". it was a little confusing around the middle, but very good. |
| Anya Tempest 2005-11-21 ch 1, | abuseI love the fact that Zenith is fat. You make your characters very real, which is excellent. I love superheroes who are realistic - I tried to make the characters in my story like real people, and hopefully I've done okay *gulp* But anyway, yes. Excellent. Bravo. |
| Ky-Ky Apocalypse 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseWow! I really loved it. It was very well written and very captivating |
| lioness2004 2005-08-13 ch 1, | abuseI like this story very much. I hope to see more stories like this. If you keep writing I'll keep reading. |
| luxian 2005-08-08 ch 1, | abusewow, your ability in putting things across is truely amazing! just watch that text language 'Putting you thru all sorts of tests... ' does not get into your masterpiece ^_^ |
| Mr.M7 2005-05-20 ch 1, | abuseI love it!I love how you showed that these were real people and not perfect gods. |
| Novthoniel 2005-04-19 ch 1, | abuseThat is absoloutely amazing, really good, and a good ending..It's extremely rare when the hero dies, it's a really nice touch. Yeah, I really like your writing style too, and I like the fact Martha isn't a stupis skinny all athletic perfect life person, it puts reality into the story...really good, words can't describe it. |
| Takara Taji 2004-12-28 ch 1, | abusethis was a really good story. Kind of sad, but it was great. the stories in fictionpress are a lot better and better quality then those on fanfiction. |
| De2nis 2004-05-23 ch 1, | abuseI like how you make the character so unique. She is trouble, fat, and bisexual which is rare in stories (usually gay or straight). I also like how you work the old-style super hero concept into the story in a new kind of way. The term "super hero" didn't even occur to me for awhile. However, I think you should have described the situation the character is in a bit more. |
| Beached Stars 2003-12-04 ch 1, | abuseMy favorite thing? She was bisexual. Makes me feel a hell of a lot better since I am, too. xD But honestly, this story is great. I love how the character was flawed. I also love the length, too. It's mysterious. I'm going to have to scope out your profile! |