I thought that this story was very good. My friend says that she didn't like it because it was too similar to the Texas Chain Saw Massarce. But I liked it.

I have to say that I love the way you started your story.

The story was very interesting in general, though it reminded me vaguely of the skindancers. I like stories with supernatural hints, but what exactly is Silvia's ability? She seems to be able to do most things considered psychic. Also, is Nic psychic as well?

The sense of urgency and haste was very well expressed in this story, good job!

I really liked this it reminds me of that new movie Taking Lives. Keep it up.
Sivart
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This story was very very intriguing, I must say that I was a little grossed out by the whole face removing thing but it was also very cool in a way. You definitely deserve a 9 out of 10 on this since there were a few spelling errors that I caught but I'm sure you tried to find most of them, great job!

Wow. This is awesome. I love it and hope you add more to it. ^_^ You have an awesome plot going... so... keep up the good work!
~Yin

wow, that was a really interesting plot! You have really thought this story out! What are u going to do to get rid of the man/thing (whatever u call it! it needs a name!), cause this story will be really repetitive if she just almost gets caught the whole time, yeah, so awesome job and awesome plot, keep writing!