No, not the end, you have to write more others I might faint!

that's a cute story

I don't agree with your first review saying that this was short, this is pretty good! You should update another chapter, since you haven't updated in two years! Oh, yea, would you check out my story? It's called, Sokato: Green Police Officer. Oh, yea, would you read it's sequel, too? It's called, Sokato: The Dark Lord's Revenge.

This story was quite well put together and very interesting. All though it could have been longer I rate it 6 out of 10.