 Anansi Spyder 2004-02-18 . chapter 1very nice
like the style
it reminds me of...
well,
it reminds me
that is all a poem need do |
 Mime 2003-07-30 . chapter 1I loved the way this poem was formatted! It was one sentence cut up, and yet it still flowed. Brilliantly written, and yes, the answer to the riddle was 'deuce'. I think you're the only one who figured that out so far, so congrats! *claps* |
 Renn Ireigh 2003-07-29 . chapter 1Beautifully done, of course, not that it surprises me or anything. I love the second-to-last stanza especially, maybe I'll end up framing it or something. ^_^
As for content - if you weren't thinking about it, I'd be a li'l bit worried about you. So unless you're obsessing over it every waking moment, I don't think you're thinking about it too much.
Love,
Renn |
 Starlight Maiden 2003-07-29 . chapter 1Amazing! Really unique and fabulously written...great idea, it'll go on my favourites for sure... |
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