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Anansi Spyder 2004-02-18 . chapter 1
very nice
like the style
it reminds me of...
well,
it reminds me
that is all a poem need do
Mime 2003-07-30 . chapter 1
I loved the way this poem was formatted! It was one sentence cut up, and yet it still flowed. Brilliantly written, and yes, the answer to the riddle was 'deuce'. I think you're the only one who figured that out so far, so congrats! *claps*
Renn Ireigh 2003-07-29 . chapter 1
Beautifully done, of course, not that it surprises me or anything. I love the second-to-last stanza especially, maybe I'll end up framing it or something. ^_^

As for content - if you weren't thinking about it, I'd be a li'l bit worried about you. So unless you're obsessing over it every waking moment, I don't think you're thinking about it too much.

Love,
Renn
Starlight Maiden 2003-07-29 . chapter 1
Amazing! Really unique and fabulously written...great idea, it'll go on my favourites for sure...
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