this was so suspenful! it gave me chills lolz, im just happy you let the mum kill the monster that was her father :)

The first time I read this it terrified me, re-reading it again, it still sends a shot to my heart. I love you darling, be strong and for the Gods sake - KEEP WRITING!

this is one that touches people. I find this a common bond in us (you and me dana)...

I remember reading this soon after you wrote it. I get the same chills as I did back then.

Its real, its tense, its what I expect of you.

wow, this is really good. I am adding you to my fav outhors list :)

Oh my gosh. That's a real shocker, it made me gasp. Wow, that made her mother kill her father? Oh, no. Very powerful story, it really scares you at the end.