Reviews for House on Haunted Hill

Reviews For: House on Haunted Hill

Geistjaeger 2006-01-10 ch 1,	This reminds me of the Old School House on Haunted Hill with Pryce. The black and white one... You ever seen it? What do you mean, no? I'm not old! I'm 21! Stop laughing at me! Anyway, so far so good. Keep up the good work.
chuckles1414 2005-09-15 ch 1,	So far, it sounds too much like House on Haunted Hill. Way too much like it. But hope to see more.
dd.bear 2005-08-25 ch 1,	this story doesn't sound like a movie, it sounds like something you made up yourself, this story could really expand into something really good and i'll look forward to reading the rest of it
lolz01 2005-06-04 ch 1,	I'm certainly intrigued...any chance of the next chapter soon??
Written Riot 2005-04-01 ch 1,	Umm, not to knock your story or anything, but this sounds a lot like the setup for Halloween: Ressurection. Are these two related in any way? Well, let's pretend they're not and I'll just say that the premise fits the genre excellently. Very intriguing, although some events happen very abruptly. Keep it up.
a lil black dress 2005-01-11 ch 1,	I really wish it was more of an original fic than like the House on Haunted Hill movies. It's a good idea...it's fun? Yes, I suppose that is a good word for it but aw, come on, honey! This should be a fanfiction.net work if anything else. You can't say this is yours. Ah, well. Now this just makes me want go watch the movie for Chris Kattan.
Nickolaus Pacione 2004-08-24 ch 1,	This story should be listed under fanfiction. Seriously if you wanted to do a story off a reality show -- be really dark about it. I know from experience because I wrote a two stories on the idea of doing a reality show based horror story, trust me when I say this. You shouldn't be calling this story what you are calling it because it is ripping off Shirley Jackson. You should work on the description on this one and make it as dark as hell. This one isn't even that dark either; don't take what I say as a flame because this is better than your other stories lined up on fp.com but seriously you need to come up with something that is geuinely yours.
Wesley The Dark Prince 2004-06-29 ch 1,	Oh Dear. Well first off the idea could be really could if it was well written and well formulated. But unfortunately you decided to skip that. As far as I see the story is so far exactly like the movie (the original 60's edition). There were quite a bit of spelling errors (not that I'm any better) and the conversations seemed quite amateur-ish. But don't let me get you down, if you work hard and practice at your writing than this story could be really interesting. Oh an by the way I just uploaded my first story in months. It's called Nephili, and theres also a prologue (I suggest you read that one first). Well I hope I was of some use to you, cya!
Coin Master 2004-05-10 ch 1,	Hm...Sounds a bit like a cross between "My Little Eye" and "House on haunted Hill". Am sure it will probs pick up. WL
hamsta-boi 2004-01-31 ch 1,	sweet fic here. made me cackle. Its intiging! Plz read and review my stuff!
katharine Emily Francis 2003-12-26 ch 1,	It does sound alot like the moive but i really like it. I like to read stories about ghosts and things like that.
AmberEye 2003-11-28 ch 1,	well I can tell you this, its a good start so keep on with it and try not to copy so much from other movies, sorry but it reminds me of like two other movies but it's still pretty good so dont mind me keep going I wanna see where it ends up
Darkchild2010 2003-07-30 ch 1,	great so far. I love it keep going I really love this story. I hope the next chapter will be uploaded soon... keep it up ... Peace out homie!

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