That, oddly, makes me feel really really good inside.

Interesting. It makes you think. Well-written. The kind of story that is very straight forward, but has that small twist that makes you gasp. What is the word for it? I can;t really think of one to some up the caliber of this story.

That was fantastic, I loved it so much. It's a sad story, but for every one but the girl. Did that make sence? Afraid that's all I can say.

What a cool story

hey, neat blending of different ideas, very different ideas; the missing, kidnapped child, and the fairy princess. I like that - you've got the mundane, the ills-of-society, and hope, all in one.

adorable story, great idea behind it. Very well written :)

This story is just plain cute, so very cute.
~the insane kitkat bar~

Interesting idea; intriguing concept. Noticed one or two spelling errors, and it seemed to end a bit bluntly. Is there more? I'd like to know more about this - why was the fairy out in our world, and why could only the cashier see her wings? I really liked the wings, though; I'm a wing fan.

This was brilliant work, I must commend you!

It's been awhile since I'd been able to get onto a working computer and reenter the land of fictionpress, and yours was the first story I read ^_^

You know, this one's almost a little creepy. The whole thing about the fairy wings. And how come it was the only the cashier could see them? Is she a fairy too?

Just that little part confuses me. Other than that, you protrayed the characters perfectly, although the mother is a little ambiguous.

The girl is cute, however. Reminsd me of my cousin--so adorable! And I like the description you used for the girl's clothes and wings. Suggestive and subtle in a way that really makes the girl stand out like you intend for her to.

I like your writing style. I like it alot. That's why I'm going to look into some more of your work when I can get back onto a computer (I'm at the library right now and it's closing)

Ta ta!