I am a sucker for story poems. It touched my heart, and it was a very tender piece to read. It wasn't sad while I was reading it, but when I started to think about it in depth, I felt very sober, as if I'd just been to a funeral. Very good work. SCORE: 9/10

The Critic, Devil Dragon of Pain

KD, This poem is great! I really like it--I only wish I could write something as deep!

Hello...I luv your poem its so beautiful.. I wish I could write like that..but anyways..keep on writting! And be good!

ooh, i'm soo glad u posted this! I remember when u showed me this a while back! and of course, i Love it!! especially the last 4 lines!! my favorite part^_^ it's really good! I wish i had ur kind of talent-_-' lol^_^ anyway, keep up the gr8 work^_^

Oh! The poem!! I was wondering (and hoping)when you were oging to post that. ^^

As I've told you before, I love this one. You have a talent for this kind of stuff...then again, you have a talent for most stuff. ^_^

Osamu: ...it's so SAD *bawls*

-_- DOn't mind him...I think he's going thorugh a phase. ^_^

Sphynx

It was good...a bit creepy, and I like that. Good job! ^_^