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| Mime 2004-02-06 ch 1, | This is sheerly beuatiful. No wonder it was selected to be published. Amazing job; keep writing! |
| Butterfly Radcliffe 2004-01-14 ch 1, | Beautiful! This poem has a wonderful depiction of heaven and it makes me want to go there really bad and be able to see it. Great job! ~God bless |
| soulspring 2003-08-23 ch 1, | a touching tribute. my condolences on your loss. |
| Deana Bell 2003-08-20 ch 1, | Beautiful in every way! ~God bless~ |
| Keep it 100 2003-08-04 ch 1, | I'm very sorry. However, as you said, she will fly with God and her soul will be free forever. ~Heart of the Sword |
| sae williams 2003-07-31 ch 1, | I was really blessed by your writing. It kind of dances and holds really valuable imagery. Thank you, Sae |
| blessed-goddess 2003-07-31 ch 1, | My thoughts are with you :) |
| Dirty Wallpaper 2003-07-30 ch 1, | that was beautiful, very touching and absolutely intrancing. im sure that your aunt loves this poem in whatever blissful place she is right now and has a tear in her eye at the loveliness of the poem and gesture. this poem had such vivid, alive, and breath taking images...the words seemed to stand out on my screen with the power they possessed, because the images are still clear in my mind, the candles in the darkness, the pearly gates of heaven, a bright light of faith at the end of a long path...very wonderful and meaningful concepts in this poem, beautiful. hang in there and kudos. |
| True Illusion 2003-07-30 ch 1, | that's very beautiful. may she rest in peace. |
| Lieschen 2003-07-30 ch 1, | WOw...that was so profound and heartfelt. Sounds like your aunt meant very much to you, very great for you to honor her memory with such a well-written poem. ELise |
| Snow Ivy 2003-07-30 ch 1, | That was absolutely beautiful. The description was so wonderful...and the emotion behind it even more so. |