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| fallingautumnleaves 2006-01-13 ch 1,  | abuseIt really makes me think. It's good. Is that all? |
| Billimarie 2004-11-20 ch 1, | abusehey, awesome twist there at the end. I loved how it was from the most unexpected point of view...nice job! -n |
| Stormcat2002 2003-07-31 ch 1, | abuseLol! This is beautiful! The final line of chapter 1 is totally unexpected, and really giving the whole story a nice touch. Excellent job! |
| Nothing Extraordinary 2003-07-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseWoah, I liked that, it was really good. I really liked this line. And the blue slave mark stood out like a lamp in the dark. |
| Daisy Decamps 2003-07-30 ch 1, | abuseWow, this story is getting pretty interesting. Human invading people from another planet, and it's written in the alien's point of view. good job, and keep it up, I'll be checking back^.^ 4eva, ~Daisy~ |