The truth behind war. Unedited. That is what happens. It is horrible, but it is necessary a lot of the time. People are unnegotiable. Negotiations fail, there is war. My favorite video game charcter said, "As long as there are people, there will always be war." It's true. No matter what we do, there will always be at least one conflict in the world.

Good poem.

The Legendary Solid Snake

I love this. I feel exactly the same way. You're style is beautiful, though you might want to reconsider the breakup of some of the lines...actually, now that I read it over again...I cahnged my mind, The break ups are great! lol
I like the usage of the one word lines. Tey're very powerful (I do that alot too ^_^). umm...not many spelling/grammar errors, just I think it should be Wives not Wifes...it's not grammatically correct, though I know you mean they only have one wife, etc.

I really like your name btw...Spirit of the Wolf...I actually made a painting with that title. You should see it: http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/loth/l/e/lelyane/lelyane.html
that's my art gallery. anyways, i can't wait to read some more of your stuff. You're really talented!
feel free to read my stuff too. ^_^

~moondust