Sadly, much too true. Hope it wasn't the case for you. Last two lines give it a powerful closing, and I especially liked "Where falling is the only thing you know." It's missing something, in the middle-end. I feel like one more line was needed or something to make this circle complete. But overall, good job on expressing this idea

i like your style a lot.
you only need 15 or so lines, and i feel like i know who and what you're talking about.

Hey, not bad at all. Keep up the good work.

Um.
Wow. I can't tell you how many times I've felt like that. That was really good. I wish I could put my feelings into words like that.
Bravo. Zana