hey you said you wouldn't show me up with your poems. gr.
but seriously, you really have soemthing of a knack for the rhythm and rhyme thing.

yo thats deep i never actually cut myself but i did want to kill myself on several occassions when i was feeling real shitty im sure everyone wanted to that once what does JTHM-aholic mean well anyway great poem

-BBS

thats a really good poem. although, i think it'd do better if it were a song. just becuase that "Its... The Need to Bleed" part is repeated 3 times.. kinda like a bridge or chorus of a song... but thats my opinion.

i like it.