wonderful poem. it sounds almost like you're looking forward to something but you don't know quite what...i love the last stanza. "to see what they find there..." enchanting.

Great work. Love the whole 'in my...' thing

Wow, very touching.I liked this.Keep up the good work!

Very nice... You use imagery very well. And your word choice is good. And the poem has a wonderful point to make. Or at least a good area to touch on. I think of the human race, searching for something higher than themselves. Something outsided of that which makes us mortal, and simple minded. I could be wrong...

that's incredible. I wish I could write like you. I love the way that your stanzas work so well together...it works so well...haunting. I agree.

I don't really now what I can put that can measure up to the greatness of the writing. The truth is, I cannot, ubt I will say that I greatly enoyed reading it and I appreciat having read it. Very thoughtful, and I foud it best to read it slowly, as every line is beautiful.
Thanx for publishing this, I really appreciated reading it.
~Sword in the Storm

Your poems are so deep, I love them all!

A wonderful poem!

I don't even know how to describe this poem. It is one of the best masterpieces I have ever read. Your style seems familiar for some reason, but in another way, it is unique. 10/10

This one was SO kewl. I loved it, and how you used the whole, "...and in my..." thing. Very nice.

Very nice, Autumn. Beautiful flow and rhythm.

- an old friend