I'm genuinely impressed. I don't think that's ever happened on this site before. So thanks for proving that the state of our species might not be as bad as I initially thought.

wonderfully written. I love the last two lines of this poem, it wraps it up so well. great job on this piece of art.

Wonderful! Positively amazing! I love it!
I have a question...all my verses run into one paragraph, how can I stop it, and get it into format like yours?
If you could email me at
fictionfreak330@hotmail.com, I would greatly appreciate it.

Oh, that was good. :) But the 'taking his hand' thing seemd abrupt... Was he by her ,or know her, the whole time?

It was really nice, anyway! ^_^

oh i like this. you know what. you should read "A Handmaid's Tale" by Margaret Atwood. I havent' finished it but her writing style for some reason reminds me a lot of yours. so read it. it's about a society in which women are realy oppressed. i havent decided whether or not i like it. well miss ya lots. ttyl!

I like it. It has a rythum to it, and it's magical in a way.

Hey...this was cool. It flowed all the way through, and I liked the end alot. Big thumbs up. Review some of mine for me, thanks.