Wow, what a solid and perfectly written poem! Very well done.

"It's begun it's trip down hate filled pather/The peace and hate will intertwine" - just awesome!

(*Is too speechlessly in love with this poem to be able to tell you that she's amazed.*)

Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

Good stuff d00d! heheh I like the second to last verse for sum reason, im not quite sure why _;; KEEP UP TEH GOOD WORK!

o welcome to your life, plez exit through the gift shop XD XD XD sorry, I just had to say that ;) been stuck in mah head since I went to Disney world XD

Great poem. I enjoyed reading it.

Good poem. True emotions show through.

This poem has somewhat a little bit of suspense behind it. Kind of makes you wonder. I'm already interested. Your work is very flowing, the words go well together. Keep it up!

P.s. Thanks for reviewing my work. :)

Nightmareslost

your poem is incredibly dark, i like the rythm it has threw the piece, i also like what you have to say.

Heh, being a person who knows ALL about hate, well... it is torture. You know what you're talking about here, awesome work.