This is really sad. Why do you have so much sadness to write about? I want you to write something happy. Something to energize my soul, dear Ravyn, because I think happiness can be contagious. Mine is yours and yours is mine. Ok?

I'm...SPEECHLESS O_O

x Yuki ^.^

*grabs tissue*

this is killing me. HEY! could i ask ya something? would you hate me, ever, if one day, in the far future and possibly never, i made a story based on this? ILL PLACE A DISCLAIMER AND COMMERCIALIZE FOR YOU! u can pick their names. plus its only an idea so far ^^ i just loved it oh-so-much. mail me! fatestraik@gmail.com if u dont ill bother u again one day if i really still want to do it

but cmon! this was really good. id let u pick an ending too. 'course, it might change cause i always get caught up in writing and follow the story's course and not my own... oh well ^^ i mean take a look at outlaw! it was supposed to be longer...now im afraid, no, i'm CERTAIN it wont reach 20 chapters, unless i do something bad to it v-v o wel

THIS WAS SO NICE! ...sniff

@.@ Kirei... Beautiful! Juniper is very delighted with this work of art. You should try to get it published.

very nice! *golf clap*

Wow, this is really good, I like it a lot.
-Mandy-

Well, sorry to say, but I just got to this Miss Ravyn! So sorry for being late!

Why, you never told me about this, either.

Oh well, point: You still have the amazing ability to make poetry understandable... which is great, because it give me some prose to read.

Now you run along and write some more. :D

Very moving. It's not like most, and your personality shines through (lord that sounds so stupid, but its true!).

WOW

Ravyn, this is, WOW

It's amazing,well done! =)

Yes, I'm shocked. Entirely shocked just reading the title, giggling at the summary (mind-reader) and left wondering at the content. But it's still excellent.