 subtleline 2004-12-28 . chapter 5Okay, I realise this hasn't been updated in a year and a half and that there is a very large chance that u have dropped it...PLEASE DON"T! Come on, its an amazing story. I mean the interaction btwn Rye and Nori is interesting and adorable. And Nori's whole denial thing, must have more! PLEASE! |
 lullaby invader 2003-09-16 . chapter 5Love the story, update soon, Nori and Rye are good together. |
 NotEnough 2003-08-13 . chapter 5Hey, where's the next part. I want to read more. The little princess \snickers/ is making me laugh. And i really don't see where this is going and it makes me WANT to KNOW.
Therefore, going by what i've said, you just have to UPDATE. Soon if possible. |
 NotEnough 2003-08-13 . chapter 4He's in denial? Or just not willing to say it out loud, which i guess is still denial. I babble, i wish i could actually review, but i can't. But, i love the story so far...:S |
 NotEnough 2003-08-13 . chapter 3Aww Nori believes in true love, i never would have figured him for the type. Bless.
He's a tad bit blind isn't he. Kind of naive. I like that about him. A naive brat, how odd... |
 NotEnough 2003-08-13 . chapter 2LMAO, ahh, Rye is bloody brilliant. I love him Already! Heh.
Love this chapter, made me laugh at the end. I was kind of half shocked at what he said at the end and half attempting not to laugh too loud. Ahh it was great.
Heh, i love this story so far...well what i've read anywayz... |
 r.mai 2003-08-11 . chapter 5Rye is um... interesting... ha ha ha. ^_^; His attitude towards Nori keeps changing. Nori's a spoiled s.o.b. A cute, spoiled s.o.b., but a spoiled s.o.b. nonetheless. Anywho, heh... one horse... two people... close proximity. ^_^ Hope you update this or any of your other stories. bye! |
 r.mai 2003-08-11 . chapter 4ah... the tortures of those in denial... It's okay Nori. ^_^ And damn, I don't suppose they'll being doing "anything" anytime soon, huh? |
 r.mai 2003-08-11 . chapter 3ha ha ha ha... Oh, I think Rye's gonna have fun with that. Ah, poor Nori. Two stolen kisses in one night. *sigh* |
 r.mai 2003-08-11 . chapter 2LOL. *evil grin* Rye is cool. MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA! |
 r.mai 2003-08-11 . chapter 1E... oh the joys of being born royalty. blah... training journey... whoopee... *pats nori on the back* Have fun? ^^; |
 Jaded Breeze 2003-08-06 . chapter 5Eh I like it. Its ok. Spice it up a little! lol thank you! update soon! |
 Illian 2003-08-04 . chapter 5Yay Rye. Authoritize on his butt! *cheers* Poor Nori, clueless *shakes head* Well, yay! Can't wait to see more!
~!shadow kei!~ |
 Edana 2003-08-03 . chapter 5And they're off. Kinda ^_^;; It's interesting to see that Nori's denial of his sexual orientation is quite an important part in this fic, and that Rye won't touch him (not literally) 'til he admites the truth. Makes everything a little more interesting. And also, I think making the story from 1st person POV of two people was a good idea. The characters are so different that if only one POV was used, there would definetely be some bias going on.
Still, very funny, great original ideas and of course nice writing style ^_^ And you're a fast updater too! |
 Mashimaro-Byul-012 2003-08-03 . chapter 5WOW! am i the first to review for chapter 5?? ^_^ WHE~ I lyked it~ Rye's just so damn sexy and cool. Poor Nori, he can't bring any of his goodies along. well KEEP WRITING! YEA YEA YEA! |