I prefer sonnets and other forms of poetry over haikus, but it's good. My favorite is the bird droppings. Who would've thought to write about that?

Interesting, but I think if you'd have tried to, at least, make each stanza three lines, it would have turned out a bit better, not a sloppy looking. But they were interesting to read!

~ CoolBeans18s

Once again damned fine imagery. Course the whole poem is really imagery, so um damned fine poem I guess.