*grin* the title just says it all doesn't it?

The last line was just cuteness

So cute! :-) The last line was great, and the whole poem was really neat. It wasn't trying to hard, and the title lets us know exactly what to expect.

This is awesome. Keep writing. I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work. Well done.
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From burning for revenge

Heh heh. Yeah. It's like looking through the window into my living room.

Well...that was...slightly random...which ish cool! Moihoihoi...I am the queen of random...^.^ yupper, this ish funny!