hehe. Nice one monkey king.

hehe i loved the last line:)

Dude you are really weird and that is a good thing

hahahaha. that was funny. brightened up my mood for sure. great job!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *dies laughing* That is hilarious! Great job.

Robin

XDD Forking brilliant. I love it.

Love the ending line! It's just a great ending to the whole thing. I also liked how you put a bit of description as to the appearance of the Drunken Monkey King. I thought at first that it was a bit repetitive but that ending line makes it funny. Great job, and I'm intending to be back to read some of your stories too. Great poem!P.S. I don't drink and I still can't rhyme! So unfair... -

Very random and odd but I liked it. The last line was very funny. I love random weirdness like this; you should write more of it!

XD I love it! I wish I could write silly poetry. u.u Alas . . . I'll just read yours and Amazing Blazes'! _ Your name in Oikush . . . Drunkoikus Monkoikus Kingoikus! _ Now, I'm off to read more of your stories!

*giggles* This is funny! Although...smoking is bad for you! Other than that, yay! This made me laugh! Oh, and Oblivia is NOT a real country.

hahahahahahaa! that was great! Thanks,I needed a good laugh! *continues to laugh uncontrolably*
mwa!

this review is from Neonlights, We Could Be Gone and Fantasy 101.
THAT ROCKED all round.
i like the last line. very funny.

funny..just really funny..i liked this alot..now i must try to refrain myself from laughing..

Insane of you. Thanks for the note. You'll be happy to now it Really WIll be up tonight. :)

That is so funny and cute! Something tells me you have a great sense of humor. I really like it.