paints a beautiful picture. oh and i like how it rhymes.

To be quite honest, that's one of the best haiku's I've read in a long time. This is true quality and talent you've written down. Awesome, awesome job... Write more!

This was beautifully written. You invoked such emotion in the space of a few words. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

Bravo..Excellent job!

Klingt ganz schön melancholisch, aber irgendwie wunderschön...

Sorry, dass ich mich so lange nicht mehr gemeldet hab, aber man glaubt gar nicht, wie anstrengend Nichtstun ist...und bei der Hitze ist der Computer auch nicht der richtige Ort *gg* Aber ich versprech dir, dass du noch alle Reviews nachgeliefert kriegst, auch auf meine Lieblingsparodie, für die ich im Moment noch keine Zeit hab...

bis bald!!
cio, hoellenwauwau

Very peaceful and soothing. The second line gives such a strong, hurt image that the 3rd line is heartwarming and beautiful.

So beautiful and it rhymes.


~Heart of the Sword

nice haiku. beautifully written, you described it wonderfully. i really like this. keep on writing!

It actually rhymes!! Lol!

I love all your woks!

Deep. And it rhymed! Hehe.

I like the originality of this piece. The second line gives it a really mysterious touch.

Another brilliant haiku. You really are one of the best.

Aw... This is wonderful! Such a soothing image. Especially the second line.

~ CoolBeans18s

yes very sad...emotional...i enjoyed