This is really good! ^_^ I like it!~Eshana the Searcher

Wow! Awesome! i can totally imagine it! keep writing *favourites*

Cool. I don't get what's meant to be goin on, but the phrases and mein are all set up for a SF/F novel. Nice, creative imagery. I'm going to try to figure this out...*favorites*

Beautifully written.

:) Awesome.

~Mlle. Daae

OMG i loved it. the lines:Legends of a tragic world. Victims of their peers' desire, kinda remind me of my poem of Night and Day for some strange reason. I liked the last two lines the best. This is going in my favs list. *^_^* Jazzie Kings

Excellent poem, beautiful in my mind. Kepp writing.

Astounding; finally I find a poem with imagery that comes so easily to you, seemingly. Keep writing. Adieu.

Quite good - very evocative.

this is such a great poem. i would consider submitting it for a real publication.

Wow...just...wow. I love this. ^^ This'll go on my favorites. My poems suck, but these don't.

That's awesome! I really love the words and images that come to mind, it paints quite a good picture. Sometimes, though, the lines that begin with ... seem like they're missing a syllable, like:

...a world slowly ending.

could sound better as:

...a world is slowly ending.

Or something of that sort. It would flow better. ~Cora Windover

Very well written poem with a excellent flow and rhyming to it.
Nice use of intelligent words, yet easy to understand enabling to identify with the author...

GREAT!

Please, write on...

I wish I lived in another world^^
Amazing poem!