Oh don't worry, i'll be around for a while, this story has captivated me and i MUST find out what happens! ^-^
great job and i hope you update soon!

Amazing!! i love this so far! I'll definately be back to read more!

*bashes Gabe upside the head* I dislike him. Thank God that Lili has a big enough mouth for all of them, eh?

*poke poke* You should post the links to the pictures you did for this.

Good grief, that was so dark and dreary...
I like it. The atmosphere is great and I've only just begun to read it. I'm putting you under my favorites.

Very vivid, but perhaps, you can try and shorten your sentences. As I read, some seemed too long. One idea, one sentence. Then start another sentence for the next idea. Run-on sentences I believe they're called. But very well done. I'll be reading more of your works, count on it!

::shudders:: Creepy dream. And boy, was it vivid.

Hehe, you had her say "Good times."

What a mess Lillian's got herself into, huh? And I take it this man you've introduced would be Mike. =P

Dani, this is brilliant! And I'm only on the first chapter. I must get off the computer now, but I will definitely read the rest soon.

intruiging.

yep...thats a nice story...go on and put up more chapters.

This is wicked awesome stuff. Your writing is very sound, technically speaking, and you've done a fantastic job of developing your main character. Keep it up!

I love your story! It's interesting and very well written! Keep up the good work and put up the next chapter soon ^_^

The story is well-written, grammatically correct, and, most importantly, captivating from the first sentance. I will look forward to future updates.