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| Last Dance 2005-04-22 ch 9,   | Nice to meet you to...lol This flows nicely, with good simple rhymes and a nie rhythm. Beautiful imagery...nice work. |
| Last Dance 2005-04-15 ch 17, | Wow...these really are good...so maybe i skip[ed out chapters 4 to 16 but i have to go now, what im trying to say is i like all of the ones i read, and i will be coming back...to read more that si |
| Last Dance 2005-04-15 ch 4, | These are really nie, i would review all of them, but i don't have time at the mo, there's so many... ..hmm, ill go to the ned one know..this could get confusing... oh yeah, i like all of the three i just read they were alla wesome, all dark and tortured, but awesome all the same, |
| Last Dance 2005-04-15 ch 1, | Wow, its short but its beautiful, I like it alot. |
| Sage Valkisco 2005-01-16 ch 16, | Yikes...Wow Matt...Girls are ** ain't they? |
| Sanqhian 2004-12-21 ch 15, | I really like these poems. I can't wait to read more. You have a great talent. As for the space problem, try holding shift when you hit enter. That might help. ~Sanqhian |
| Aemilia 2004-12-16 ch 15, | Hey I liked this stuff. Poetry always impresses me (well the half-way decent stuff at any rate). I couldn't write poetry if my life depended on it, so now I'm all jealous of your lyrical skills. Oh, my favorite was "Hidden Payment." Poetry doesn't have to be all serious or angsty. -Aemilia |
| frugale 2004-12-13 ch 1, | I liked the rhyming and all except for 'tears and fears'. It's quite common, actually. |
| EchoesOfReason 2004-12-11 ch 15, | Wow, this reminds me a lot of my poem, Are what we are. And mostly because it speaks of how people are afraid to take chances and be bold and stuff. Sorry I didn't read this earlier, I've been bogged down with school, as I can imagine everyone else has as well. Either way this is amazing, the imagery was blatant in my mind. I could literally visualize the 'fork of lightning', which was well described, by the way. All in all, this was a very nice piece coming from you. I'd say it is one step forward in writing metaphors. Take care, good luck, and great job! Love always,a.twisted.soul |
| Scarlet Azalea 2004-11-02 ch 1, | Deeper in contemplation than a lot of poets I've read on this site. Good job. I think you have potential to go further. |
| Starry Sweet87 2004-09-03 ch 13, | aww, sad! |
| Fa 2004-08-04 ch 12, | Umm..Interesting poem, very soulful..keep writing and reviewing! |
| EchoesOfReason 2004-08-04 ch 12, | It's quite scary how I can relate all too well to this specific poem...except for him not her lol. But this is a very lovely short piece, a subtle romantic one I have to say. Still very well written. And so nice to hear from you again after such a long while! Well, great job, take care, and good luck! Love, a.twisted.soul |
| Sanqhian 2004-08-02 ch 11, | I loved them all! You have a great talent. Your poetry rhymes. Which a lot of people have a hard time doing. Keep writing. ~Thank you for reviewing Blood Hunt. Please, check out my new story, The Behemoth.~ |
| EchoesOfReason 2004-01-28 ch 9, | DAMN! Simple rhymes yet you managed to make quite the impact on the depth of the words. I like this...a lot! It flowed so well, it was great! Good job. Take care, keep it up, and good luck! Love always, A-Light-From-Your-Darkness |