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| Jade6 2003-08-01 ch 1,   | This piece is AMAZING! I know that is a rather lame thing to say but your imagery just knocked me off my chair. It was - WOW! My favorite line had to be: The clouds are burning, yellow light cast ember orange. My mouth fell open at that image. It could not have been more perfect - and I also loved the desription of the car lights dying as the engine did as you star gazed... the whole thing... I am speechless. This one is going on my favorites list. I want to visite Ireland now! Jade |