Once again, good work. I especially liked this one.

i think a lot of people get to a point of thinking like this, hopefully most of us bounce out of it. very very good, i liked it a lot. i cant write like this, but it's always fun to see people who can (and you probably think this is one of ur "bad" ones - and so humbling me farther. *sigh*)

~color outside the lines~

ps i updated that chapter u read in our story...and we changed the ending to...KIND of a fight scene.

I like. A lot. Just one thing-- some caps were a little jarring.

i love this poem! you're an awesome writer... stop being lazy and review more of my poems! lol, just teasing. oh, and you're never gettin your dye back because um... because... because... my purple tye dye elephant/buffalo ate it... yes... lol

Nice...the title is perfect...I really like the first verse (it's a chorus, yeah?) (and if it is a chorus, I like all the choruses, just the first one the best) (look at me! I'm rambling!) (sorry...)
Hehe...sorry! :D
>winged one

its brillant lol

I liked the flow of this. It was a nice little piece. ^^ Keep writing!

This is really good!
It ROX **! I can even hear the music in my head...

- Crucified Sanctity -

Again i think this is a great song and of international standard! Can u sing?