excellent. i love your imagery. you have the exceptional talent of capturing the sinister spirits of otherwise-mundane things. but of course, 'tis death to be a cubicle worker. *shrivels up* ugh, plastic. ugh, co-workers. ugh, monotony and bad coffee. remind me to never be one of those.

hello, this is the first of your writings i have read and i really enjoyed it. I often feel the same way, and i think you conveyed this mundane, lifeless feeling very well through your poem. keep it up.

sincerely,

xonlyxthexcloudsx.