i really liked thisstory!you did a great job on it!

this is wonderful.

CUTENESS! Oh, Rudi is just so sweet. I'm glad Marlene decided to stay, and he mentioned something I hadn't considered before. About the economy. I'm sure the sequel will be superb. I can't wait, and I acutally have a tiny idea for it.
Hugs,
pink

Oh man, that was a lovely story! Rudolf sounds sexy, yay! I'd like to read the sequel, so hit me up with the details ASAP yo! Great job! ^_^

Great Job Comrade! *applause* Keep on writing (you better write a sequel or I will superglue you to that computer chair and MAKE you! lmao, keep it up!
*~Comrade Stavon~*

Whew! I'm so glad everything's working out for Marlene and Rudolf! You had me worried there for a while!
God, I hated Betty with a passion. --;
I thought the fiance was gonna be a huge thing in that one chapter...
What a lovely ending! I'm glad everything turned out all right.
**waits in suspense for sequel**
PS: That little part about one of your characters "respecting their father, but not really being close to them..."
I think I know where I might have heard that before!! *hint hint wink wink*

O...I told you I'd like this story! You had me from the beginning and the victorian houses...way to set up the action! Lovely setting, I do say so myself!
I also like the character developments, especially of Rudolf. "You're a demon...in a business suit?" Classic. ^_^ You do a good job of making Rudolf a dynamic character...he's kinda foreboding in the beginning, then we see he's not as evil as we thought.
Did I mention I like the name Rudolf? *wink*
Great job, keep up the good work!
~Me

This was a very sweet chappy. I wish my guy's mom were as nice as Rudolf's! How many more left? Two more chapters? Will there be a marriage?
~pink

Aww. . . I DID want to see a catfight, though. Vladimir sounds . . . interesting. Could he create complications later? Only two chapters. We shall see.
ever reading
~pink

>sniff, sniff< Do I smell a confrontation?
That's pretty bad, thought, to have finally found your soulmate, change your life to be with him, and then learn he's engaged. I imagine she's pretty upset. So, two more, now, is it? I can't wait to see how this all rolls out.
pink

I love the impromtu "fencing" bout! "You forget I'm a Seberist." Only three more chapters? Ach!
I'm glad to be of help, too!

What a cliffhanger! I REALLY wanna know what she's gotta do! Update soon . . . er, when you can.
pink

Hey, sorry I'm just now getting to this. I wonder who those men are and what Rudolf is doing there. Keep going, chick, you've come too far to give up now!
pink

What's she gonna do? Ach, what can she do? Omigosh, I gotta know!

moremoremoreplease,
pink

OOh, intrigue. I likes.