wow, your talented. that was great (for lack of better word) it flowed smoothly :) i don't know what to say

hi i'm a friend of donna. (she wants to lick your boobies) btw good poem!

i LOVE the second to the last stanza on this one, Travis. it was great. very well written, one of your better

~color outside the lines~

awesome, incredible stuff.

REALLY good work.

Great work as always, i loved the verse "Your trust I keep so near
To your love and voice so clear
Doom my life and pray for thee
To my their suffer need"

it had so much meaning. I always believed that songs show just how vulnerable the artists is feeling at the time they wrote their work. This one takes the cake. it has great insight. Don't worry, i'll keep reviewing. and just to let u know, i updated Ember Rain, just for you! hehe.

Oh and by the way, i forgot to post the actual review. I read it and i thought it was really good, specially the ending. and yeah i was wondering the same thing that hardac was about your band's mp3's, do u have any , cuz if you do i'd want to hear them...good song.

All in all it looks GREAT - some lines do not make sense to me, but this might be because of my 'bad' english.

P.S.: Do you have any mp3's of your band online? (I'm quite curious - many Bands you like are my favourites too) If you have no webspace for your songs I could provide you with a few MB. Just mail me if you are interested.

LoL, sorry, i meant it as a hipocritical joke, which is why i asked u to review my stuff after acting mad about how you asked people to review your stuff...but I guess its just my dry sense of humor

AH! It worked! I haven't been able to review anything for a while (my compy was messed up). Good thing this worked though. Once again, I am mesmerized by your work. You are extremely talented, and I hope that you continue your work. I was wondering though, do your poems/songs relate to your life? Please e-mail me and tell me.
'preciate it!^^
-Esen, Empress of the Shadow Realm