more great images here... the more I read your stuff, the more I love it. (typo in the 2nd line of the 3rd stanza, I think) Great job.

HGidu hi there, heh as always thankyou soo much for your advice it's an honour to be given such help from someone as talented as you are, but the thing with the full stops and commas is that f.press won't let me have them! I mean I've posted my poems up on poetry.com and it's in the format with your suggestions and everything but on here it won't let me do it *sigh* oh well I guess great minds think alike because my original copy had your suggestions in it... but you're extra great since you're super talented mr Metpahor king! Oh ands again another amazing poem filled with incredible metaphors and imagery! And I just LOVE the driver character and how you describe his life... "The driver knows he no hero" just an amazing piece to read my friend ^_^

"The driver knows he's not hero, but all the same he has to try," what great lines...yes, I think "history!"

wow.

As with all your works, I love this.

One thing though...at the end, when you say "...where nothing ever happens." This would indicate that night itself is a place. It's just a grammatical thing, so it's nothing important, I'd just suggest putting "when" in there instead of where. Just my two cents.

Keep up all this excellence anyway.

Nice, poignant, i especially like the line :"who will press chanrges of silence" good work, keep it up.