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| Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-25 ch 40,   | Brandon was so annoying in the beginning that I wanted to jump into the story and strangle him but when he finally started maturing, he was a really okay guy. Your character developments were really good and it's kinda sad that I finished the story since I liked them so much :) You switched up words here and there but besides that, your story was really good. :D |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-24 ch 1, | Haha, this was so silly and funny I loved it. Brandon gets on my last nerve but I really liked this chapter :) |
| Forgotten Sunday 2008-05-09 ch 40, | this is the first story with this many chapters that i've ever finished reading. it was amazing! |
| Singing for Absolution 2008-04-08 ch 40, | wow. I actually work for a band (or plural) and have spent a long time on a bus. I really wish it had been this...exciting. Loved the story, it made me smile. Cheers. |
| Singing for Absolution 2008-04-08 ch 1, | Truly funny. Short, pixie-esque lead singer. Hm...reminds me of a certain front man of Muse. Who is less...flamboyant of course, but still small, and normally cute. Awesome storie. Can't wait to see what happens. Oh wait! I don't! It's already finished! erm...so, now that we've established that I've completly lost it...Cheers. |
| Caffeinated Poison 2008-02-11 ch 11, | I love total divas. They bug the hell out of me, but at the end of day-they are soo sweet. |
| YoungInside 2007-12-19 ch 1, | I'll be leaving the review in the sequel. This is just to add it to my favourites. (: |
| your harbor 2007-10-14 ch 1, | Another fantastic piece of writing. I know why I'm not surprised. You, my dear, need to be published. If not, now, then soon. In the near future. (: Yep - you do. |
| shinaynay 2007-09-27 ch 40, | good stuff |
| Strangely Natural 2007-06-22 ch 40, | Very funny, and annoying, and sad, a little random I guess but well written and very sweet! |
| youpin 2007-06-01 ch 1, | I love your work and this story is fabulous. |
| LadyLush 2007-06-01 ch 40, | omg i spent hours reading this stupid story but i LOVED it. you are a fabulous writer. you make brandon really childish and the stereotypical gay look but then ten minutes later he's grown up like and sensible. but i loved his childish spirit. he's like peter pan lol. i loved this story so much and yeh lol x |
| Erisah Mae 2007-04-30 ch 40, | This read like a soap every once in a while, but in a good way. "Pixie Diva" LMAO, what a concept! Even if Brandon was supposed to be the cliched rocker, you mananged to make him sound like a real individual, with extremely complex sides to him... A well rounded-off person by all means, and really funny to read about. This relationship is so dysfunctional it's near perfect! I had a fun time reading this, Erisah |
| anne1822 2006-12-27 ch 33, | lol wow funny chapter...I'm realy liking the story so far. |
| SkateForLife 2006-12-16 ch 40, | Aww! I loved this story! The last few chapters were the best though. And you have a very imaginative mind to be able to create Brandon's character. Keep up the good work! |