You...must...keep writing this story. There are a few grammar errors, but the idea is absolutely amazing. I LOVE it. KEEP GOING...please.

this story is super different than what i usually read but it's kewl... update soon!

This is one of the best stories I have read on fictionpress.com so please please please update. Kendal

That sounds even worse.Update soon!

Wicked story.

That does not sound good. Update soon!

Great story! It pulled me in at the beginning, and it's great so far! can't wait for more!

Please update as soon as you can. I love this story,

Hmm..this is pretty dark and weird, but good. I'm looking forward to more.

"the prostitute showed Sterling her bracelet made of fingernails with eye pupils staring out of each one."

Eye pupils? You do know that pupils are only holes, right?

Cool! You are now added 2 my Author Alert list and fave author list.
I can't wait 4 the sequel. Please read my stories!

It's a really good story! ^.^ I kinda wish that Nori and sterling could have stayed together but, I'm not writing the story! I'm sure you had a good reason! Please udate soon! (Please check out my mangas! ^.^ 1)Mystic Saga 2)The life of Yoma tetsuno 3)Beastgirl Yujiyuki!

aw...that sux! (not the chapter...what happened) i hope nori and sterling somehow meet up again...which im sure they will

i great storie but one thing concerns me. your title says rated pg-13 for gore and guts. no pg-13 had gutz. i think you should change the rating to R. please r + r my storie. it is called mind chappel

thats a really strange story ya had in ur head! obviously im not bored yet...so keep at it!